Rflctn task 3
ACUN ILICALI
If I were a member of a committee
choosing the man of the year, I would choose Acun Ilıcalı because he is very
successful person. He is producer and showman. He was born in Edirne in 1969.
After his high school life, he started his university education at İstanbul University.
However, he chosed to study in media.
He opened a jean shop but he went bankrupt in
1995. His first production is ‘Acun Firarda’. Thanks to this programme, he
started being a famous person, and everybody knew him in 2002. He travelled one
hundred five country. He founded the Acun Media. He has been the producer of
Survivor, Fear Factor, Yetenek Sizsiniz Türkiye, O Ses Türkiye, and Devler
Ligi. Additionally, he made a lot of stand-up in many cities of Turkey. He was
awarded in many contests.
Acun Ilıcalı is very determined people. Although his parent died when he
was young, he could continue his life. He did not give up. He says that when he
wants something, he does whatever he can do to realize it. That why he is a
successful person.
He is also helpful. He donates his some of
properties to helpful institutes. Namely, he is also generous people. For
example, he has realized a campaign to help people who suffer from a destroying
earthquake in Van. He also donated all of money he earned in a support campaign
to children who have a chronic disease. He expresses that the more I help
people by donating my money the, more I earn.
I think that he always wants the better. He is not content with what he
has. It is very important characteristics because that is why he always develops,
and makes better things.
Acun Ilıcalı
does not use his private life to be known. He wants to be known for his
success. I think he is a sincere people. He says what he thinks.
Finally, he
has bought TV 8, and I am sure he will not stop. He will be one of the most
important people in the world.
Dear Esra ;
ReplyDeleteI liked your topic. The images were placed very well. Your type selection is good . Also i liked your blog's colour.I think you could write a longer paragraph if it is possible. Your ideas are well supported and relevant to the content of the journal.There is a unity in your journal and there is no irrelevant sentence. Except for some mistakes , your ideas are properly linked.Flow of the ideas are not smooth . However , your entry has some small mistakes. You could write a better and interesting title. You should use ''chosed'' not chose , a grammar mistake. You could use ''he started his university education...'' not gained a place . It is a small collocation mistake. In line 5 it should be ''chosed'' again , grammatical mistake. In line 15 , it can be ''founded'' , a grammatical mistake. In line 23 , you can use an inverted comma and write '' That's'' , a punctuation mistake. In line 24 , you can use ''donated'' instead of donate if this action took place in past. It is a wrong using of tenses. In line 36 , you should use a verb like ''be'' . It is inappropriate sentence form.
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