1)What
great shape she is in, and she looks healthy.
What
great shape she is in, and how healthy she looks .
2)
The doctor wanted to find out why Linda was underweight and about her blood
sugar level.
The
doctor wanted to find the reason about Linda’s underweight and blood sugar
level.
3)
Following a regular program of exercise is more beneficial for me than to be on
fat diet.
Following
a regular program of exercise is more beneficial for me than being on a fat
diet.
4)
What I like best about my fitness centre are the modern Lifestyle machines and
they have such a beautiful Olympic size swimming pool.
What
I like best about my fitness centre are the modern Lifestyle machines and
beautiful Olympic swimming pool.
5)
Not only is Jim healthy, but how athletic he is.
How
athletic and healthy Jim is
6)
Due to his son’s persistence and because he wanted to lose 10 pounds, Frank
decided to join a fitness centre.
Due to his son’s persistence and desire of
losing 10 pounds, Frank decided to join a fitness centre
7) When Richard realized that his eating
habits were the cause of illnesses, he began to plan his meals more
conscientiously and in a careful way
When
Richard realized that his eating habits were the cause of illnesses, he began
to plan his meals more conscientiously and carefully
8)
Julian decided to try a homeopathic treatment as wall as he changed his diet.
Julian decided to try a homeopathic treatment
and he changed his diet.
9)
Shari really enjoys ocean kayaking and to go hiking in the desert.
Shari really enjoys ocean kayaking and going
hiking in the desert.
10)
This is combination of vitamins that build up the immune system and they
prevent infection from spreading.
This
is combination of vitamins building up the immune system and preventing infection
from spreading.
9.10
Editing Activity
1)instead
of , because
of
2)instead
of staying, you should stay
3)but
cannot be used here
4)instead
of consequently, because
5)there should be verb
6) medicine is important when you are sick
,furthermore ,you should take care of yourself
7)but cannot be used here.
8)
9)it cannot be used
10)
11)clinic that has a…
5.26
Editing Activity: Run-on
Recognition
1)Because
Grace is a vegetarian,
she must pay special attention to the amount of
protein in the food she eats, so
she eats a lot of beans, she also eats eggs.
That is why
2) When Grace first
became a vegetarian, she missed eating meat since she had always liked the food
she eats, so she eats a lot of
beans, she also eats eggs.
Ate However
3) When Grace first
became a vegetarian, she missed eating meat since she has always liked the
taste of it, but now she can’t imagine eating meat because she has grown to
appreciate the pure taste of meatless cuisine, and meat tastes very strange to
her, and so she is happy to be a vegetarian.
……………………………………………….Meat
tastes very strange to her, and so she is happy to be a vegetarian.
4) Sometimes it’s very
difficult to eat out in restaurants due to limited meatless choices on menus
although that is changing now with the increase in vegetarian restaurant. , However
5) Grace is opposed
to the killing of animals, so not only is she a vegetarian but she is also very
disturbed by the use of animal fur for clothing.
6) She feels better
now that she doesn’t eat meat anymore, she feels more humane and she feels
healthier.
……………………………………………She feels more humane, and
healthier.
7) Being a vegetarian
and feeling that she is doing her share to protect animals, Grace becomes
irritated when people question her motivates for being a vegetarian although
she tries to be patient with such people, and she tries to make them understand
the value of saving animals, but often people just don’t understand.
…………………………however
she tries to be patient ……………understand
5.27Editing Activity
1)
To play soccer,
baseball, and hockey
……………………………………….are not common games played.
2)
Because this is such
an important meeting, I am wearing nice
………………………………………………….nice clothes
3)
The professor told
about the experiments in cardiovascular
Improvement. Explained, spoke about
4) This
new method of losing weight seems.
………………………………………seems to be practical
5) How
many times you ran around the track?
How many times did you run around the track?
6)
How that concert was
enjoyable!
How enjoyable that concert was!
7)
After the game, the
crowd left the parking in a very orderly fashion there were no problems.
……………………………….so there
were no………………………
8) Doctors they make me
nervous
Doctors make me nervous
9) Although many people
haven’t this book
……………………….I have read
it.
10)
After the lecture was
over, where you went?
After the lecture was
over, where did you go?
1)What great shape she is in, and she looks
healthy.
What great shape she is in, and how healthy she
looks .
2) The doctor wanted to find out why Linda was underweight
and about her blood sugar level.
The doctor wanted to find the reason about
Linda’s underweight and blood sugar level.
3) Following a regular program of exercise is
more beneficial for me than to be on fat diet.
Following a regular program of exercise is more
beneficial for me than being on a fat diet.
4) What I like best about my fitness centre are
the modern Lifestyle machines and they have such a beautiful Olympic size
swimming pool.
What I like best about my fitness centre are
the modern Lifestyle machines and beautiful Olympic swimming pool.
5) Not only is Jim healthy, but how athletic he
is.
How athletic and healthy Jim is
6) Due to his son’s persistence and because he
wanted to lose 10 pounds, Frank decided to join a fitness centre.
Due to
his son’s persistence and desire of losing 10 pounds, Frank decided to join a
fitness centre
7) When
Richard realized that his eating habits were the cause of illnesses, he began
to plan his meals more conscientiously and in a careful way
When Richard realized that his eating habits were
the cause of illnesses, he began to plan his meals more conscientiously and
carefully
8) Julian decided to try a homeopathic
treatment as wall as he changed his diet.
Julian
decided to try a homeopathic treatment and he changed his diet.
9) Shari really enjoys ocean kayaking and to go
hiking in the desert.
Shari really enjoys ocean kayaking and going
hiking in the desert.
10) This is
combination of vitamins that build up the immune system and they prevent
infection from spreading.
This is
combination of vitamins building up the immune system and preventing infection
from spreading.
